man: minor grammar fixups in systemd-cryptenroll

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Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek 2021-09-24 09:12:02 +02:00
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<refsect1>
<title>Description</title>
<para><command>systemd-cryptenroll</command> is a tool for enrolling hardware security tokens and devices into a
LUKS2 encrypted volume, which may then be used to unlock the volume during boot. Specifically, it supports
tokens and credentials of the following kind to be enrolled:</para>
<para><command>systemd-cryptenroll</command> is a tool for enrolling hardware security tokens and devices
into a LUKS2 encrypted volume, which may then be used to unlock the volume during boot. Specifically, it
supports tokens and credentials of the following kind to be enrolled:</para>
<orderedlist>
<listitem><para>PKCS#11 security tokens and smartcards that may carry an RSA key pair (e.g. various YubiKeys)</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>PKCS#11 security tokens and smartcards that may carry an RSA key pair (e.g. various
YubiKeys)</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>FIDO2 security tokens that implement the <literal>hmac-secret</literal> extension (most FIDO2 keys, including YubiKeys)</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>FIDO2 security tokens that implement the <literal>hmac-secret</literal> extension (most
FIDO2 keys, including YubiKeys)</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>TPM2 security devices</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Recovery keys. These are similar to regular passphrases, however are randomly generated
on the computer and thus generally have higher entropy than user chosen passphrases. Their character
on the computer and thus generally have higher entropy than user-chosen passphrases. Their character
set has been designed to ensure they are easy to type in, while having high entropy. They may also be
scanned off screen using QR codes. Recovery keys may be used for unlocking LUKS2 volumes wherever
passphrases are accepted. They are intended to be used in combination with an enrolled hardware
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<term><option>--recovery-key</option></term>
<listitem><para>Enroll a recovery key. Recovery keys are most identical to passphrases, but are
computer generated instead of human chosen, and thus have a guaranteed high entropy. The key uses a
character set that is easy to type in, and may be scanned off screen via a QR code.</para></listitem>
<listitem><para>Enroll a recovery key. Recovery keys are mostly identical to passphrases, but are
computer-generated instead of being chosen by a human, and thus have a guaranteed high entropy. The
key uses a character set that is easy to type in, and may be scanned off screen via a QR code.
</para></listitem>
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