man: some improvements to language and style in nmcli-examples manual page

Signed-off-by: Stephen Wadeley <swadeley@redhat.com>
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Stephen Wadeley 2013-10-31 10:39:16 +01:00 committed by Jiří Klimeš
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@ -133,7 +133,7 @@ org.freedesktop.NetworkManager.settings.modify.hostname auth
</example>
<para>
This command shows configured polkit permissions for various NetworkManager
operation. These permissions or actions (using polkit language) are configured
operations. These permissions or actions (using polkit language) are configured
by a system administrator and are not meant to be changed by users. The usual
place for the polkit configuration is /usr/share/polkit-1/actions/org.freedesktop.NetworkManager.policy.
<emphasis>pkaction</emphasis> command can display description for polkit actions.
@ -170,9 +170,9 @@ $ nmcli -p con show conf my-con-em1
</programlisting>
</example>
<para>
The first command adds an ethernet connection named <emphasis>my-con-em1</emphasis>
The first command adds an Ethernet connection named <emphasis>my-con-em1</emphasis>
that is bound to interface name <emphasis>em1</emphasis>. The connection is configured
with static IP addresses. The second and third commands modifies DNS parameters of the
with static IP addresses. The second and third commands modify DNS parameters of the
new connection profile. Using the last <emphasis>con show configured</emphasis> the
connection is displayed so that all parameters can be reviewed.
</para>
@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ nmcli ipv4.addresses> desc
=== [addresses] ===
[setting description]
Array of IPv4 address structures. Each IPv4 address structure is composed of 3 32-bit values; the first being the IPv4 address (network byte order), the second the prefix (1 - 32), and last the IPv4 gateway (network byte order). The gateway may be left as 0 if no gateway exists for that subnet. For the 'auto' method, given IP addresses are appended to those returned by automatic configuration. Addresses cannot be used with the 'shared', 'link-local', or 'disabled' methods as addressing is either automatic or disabled with these methods.
Array of IPv4 address structures. Each IPv4 address structure is composed of three 32-bit values; the first being the IPv4 address (network byte order), the second the prefix (1 - 32), and last the IPv4 gateway (network byte order). The gateway may be left as 0 if no gateway exists for that subnet. For the 'auto' method, given IP addresses are appended to those returned by automatic configuration. Addresses cannot be used with the 'shared', 'link-local', or 'disabled' methods as addressing is either automatic or disabled with these methods.
[nmcli description]
Enter a list of IPv4 addresses formatted as:
@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ nmcli> quit
</example>
<para>
Example session in the nmcli interactive connection editor.
The scenario creates an ethernet connection (configuration) with static addressing (IPs and DNS).
The scenario creates an Ethernet connection (configuration) with static addressing (IPs and DNS).
</para>
<example><title>nmcli usage in a NetworkManager dispatcher script to make ethernet/Wi-Fi mutually exclusive</title>